Who am I

Who am I

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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Alone, wandering down a dreary road,With no dreams for I to call my own,Who suffer with what I bestowed,But I, a single soul alone.

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Who am I
By: Adam M. Snow

Alone, wandering down a dreary road,
With no dreams for I to call my own,
Who suffer with what I bestowed,
But I, a single soul alone.
Seeking the truth of a past long forgotten,
A truth broken for many years,
Now my essence soon to rotten,
And I surrounded by my many fears.

The same question runs through my mind,
Do I now dare to ask?
My true love I left behind,
And I cower behind my mask,
Watching her face as time takes her away,
I'm afraid, I bowed my head in shame,
With emptiness in my heart, growing night and day,
I seek to find her longing name.
Now I cover the truth with lies,
As I await for my day to die.
Will I remember myself and rise?
Still I'm stuck with the question, "Who am I?"

© 2010 Adam M. Snow


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Another strong piece of soul searching. I think my favourite line is 'Will I remember myself and rise?' It's beautifully simple in structure yet loaded with meaning. :)

A lot of your poems seem to be in this vein. I really hope you find your way back to wholeness soon.

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Another strong piece of soul searching. I think my favourite line is 'Will I remember myself and rise?' It's beautifully simple in structure yet loaded with meaning. :)

A lot of your poems seem to be in this vein. I really hope you find your way back to wholeness soon.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love your word choice...there is an almost desperateness to it...very well done

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Vulnerability makes your words here so powerful. The flow and rhythm is graceful in this piece and your words are precise. Write on!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

Glendale, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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