Charm Ye Bell Tower

Charm Ye Bell Tower

By: Adam M. Snow

The clock charms the hour;

justle the bells in towered.

Ring once for love, twice the sorrow;

crack thy mouth, thy clapper swings,

bring forth thee thy morrow sings.

Reviews

[Jenni-Chan]

Nice. I like it.

[Ripple of Aqua]

This is exquisite in its memorizing rhythm.

[Jazique]

I really like the last parts with the rings. Anyways well done with the chimes of life and time that passes by.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the language and the use of the bells. I miss being in Europe. The old churches were a pleasure sound to be heard. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

This poem is brilliant. I love the words you have chosen to bring it to life.

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This was lovely, I do love the way you write, love the old language.
To me that language is very romantic. And can make any poem a masterpiece.Ring once for love, twice the sorrow...awesome

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you have the most coolest pen writing i have ever seen beautiful poem!!!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Lovely. Just lovely.
Love this line:
"Ring once for love, twice the sorrow;"
I could read this small poem over and over as if it was a long poem. Nice write.

[realmwriter]

Old language somehow lends a youthfulness to this. It begs us the reader to look forward to tomorrow and to long to hear that bell charm the hour. Very Impressive!

1000 out of 1000

[Ubiquitous]

I'm very impressed by your language, I love the old-fashioned style. Very well written, it's beauty really shows.