From the Depth of Ethereal

Such heavenly beauty beyond my human reach, ut a lowly soul this world does 'seech. Lost in a time of tragedy and flutter; there is a pain-so utter.

From the Depth of Ethereal

By: Adam M. Snow

 

Such heavenly beauty beyond my human reach,

but a lowly soul this world does 'seech.

Lost in a time of tragedy and flutter;

there is a pain-so utter.

The Epiphany came in an instant and blinded me,

from the fear and rage that I now see.

I lay there in torment as time now fall,

night is the victim to this nature's call.

A haunting of melody that will not dispel;

Souls in torment as their lore now tell.

A perfect light arises from the shadows realm below,

the hidden world so far away where thoughts unspoken go.

And from the depth of Ethereal, I could still hear her heart beating;

one after another, the dark clouds are fleeting.

The dreams are real and time stands still if only you believe,

all things that test reality; the visions fools and children see.

From the Depth of Ethereal came howls of former corporeal,

as a soft gentle breeze now makes my heart feel at ease.

The wails of the dead now brings forth shudders of dread;

but this one lowly soul, peace is all she said.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

peace. the most powerful force in this world...and the next.

[Nath]

Breathtaking. The atmosphere reminded me of that of some mystery stories I read and enjoyed as much as this poem. It's plain beautiful.

[Southern Cross]

"the hidden world so far away where thoughts unspoken go.
And from the depth of Ethereal, I could still hear her heart beating;"..My favorite line and it was a hard choice here for me. Some emotions are never beyond our ability to touch them. Many universes somehow combine to join thoughts , love, longing . This had intensity and imagery that may change in context for the reader. I think that breaths life into our words.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The stark and resounding imagery really reads well, well done.

[Katrina Mckeown]

beautiful imagery well expressed poem.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Love the emotion and imagery in this piece. So vivid and intense. Awesome use of vocabulary too.

[Mockingbird]

i guess he got closure in the end from losing his loved one. very pretty poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

"The dreams are real and time stands still if only you believe,
all things that test reality; the visions fools and children see."
The poem is amazing. I need time to take apart and try to grasp the meaning and thoughts in this entertaining poem. So many statements grasped my attention. I had to read a few time for the beauty of the thoughts and the language. Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MoriartyMesa]

I like the start and jump of emotions and imagery.