Silent Cry

We cry when things are painful. Then we try to hide the feeling, and that is even more painful. That is how we live. We live our lives with acceptance towards the never ending pain.

There was a girl who lived in a crowded place. The girl was not important, nor was the place. That she was hurting was what mattered. Her, being constantly mistreated by everything that surrounded her, and no one would ever notice that crying recklessly and shouting out for help was all she ever did the last few years of her life or acknowledge that they were the reason themselves as to why she felt such lonely pain. Even though she constantly roared for help, desperately, she accepted what they did to her and never dared to ask why. And so it became a habit, a custom of her's because she knew that no one ever heard her when she cried, yet she couldn't help but yelp in pain every time the voices in her head would cruelly taunt at her.

Because crying is always desperate and painful, a silent cry would make her whole. Until one day we open her door and find her dying, ever so silently.

Author's Note

Just a thought I wanted to share

Reviews

[Half Dream]

"Because crying is always desperate and painful, a silent cry would make her whole. Until one day we open her door and find her dying, ever so silently."

Such a beautiful line. I find this piece great. I love the way you started until the end. I am sure a lot of us been there! Whenever we choose to close the doors and cry behind the door without reaching for a comfort. Great work. Keep writing. :)

[Sofia]

Thank you, your review really means a lot to me. I find it amazing to be able to hear that you understand. Thanks for reviewing :)

[Half Dream]

My pleasure. :)

[Susan]

I really enjoyed reading your STORY , it's amazing . :D
It's TRUE when " We cry when things are painful. Then we try to hide the feeling, and that is even more painful. That is how we live. We live our lives with acceptance towards the never ending pain. "
#LOVEIT

[Sofia]

Thank you so much for your review ! I really appreciate it and it means a lot