Think

Just something I wrote.

The sun comes up,
another day,
children laugh,
work and play.
The world around them,
is as perfect as can be,
we're all oblivious,
to what we can't see.
We don't realize,
the torture in this world,
the horror others face,
from miles away.
So whenever you think,
you've had it real bad,
think of other kids,
who would die for what you have.

Author's Note

Just a Poem I wrote :)

Reviews

[Pickleby Davies]

This is so true and honestly puts you in your place a little. Really gets the message across to stop whining for what you don't have and be glad with what you do. :)

[Midnight_Mystery]

another great write :)

[Daydreamer54]

The ;ast part troes the flow of course,but i like how meaningful and right this poem is! great write! :)

[Lindsey]

I like it. Very good way of snapping people back into the actual reality.