Forever

Forever

A Poem by SomerSunshine

I see them born,
I see them die.
I watch them love,
I watch them cry.
Forever I shall watch and pray,
knowing one can never stay.
Immortality has come to late,
it's a yearn one learns to sate.
A decision I hope I burn in hell with
forever.

I fell in love,
my heart flew away as if a dove.
I pleaded to God to let me stay
to let my love live another day.
He granted my request
told me it wasn't the for the best.
Now I wish to grow old,
but I know my soul's already been sold
forever.

For now my love can never see,
that I'm an angel, cursed to be.
My love is dead and gone,
 now I see I was in the wrong.
I see the laughter galore,
but in my heart I know one day they'll be no more.
One day I wish to die,
and let another desperate soul let a day pass by.
One day I hope they'll learn,
that one day they'll all burn.


© 2010 SomerSunshine


Author's Note

SomerSunshine
Another look on immortality.

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I like the lines:
For now my love can never see,
that I'm an angel, cursed to be.
Well penned

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomerSunshine

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are quite welcome.
this was written really well. Very deep and dark. loved it. keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is a very powerfully voiced piece. an amazing piece that i will never get tired of reading it over and over again. very well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 15, 2010
Last Updated on December 5, 2010
Tags: Teen, Angels, Immortality, Love

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SomerSunshine
SomerSunshine

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My name is Somer, and I'm just a girl from Minnesota. I love to write, and one day I hope to become an author. I like stories with a lot of feeling, and run-on sentences. So hopefully my stories h.. more..

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