Forever

Forever

A Poem by SomerSunshine

I see them born,
I see them die.
I watch them love,
I watch them cry.
Forever I shall watch and pray,
knowing one can never stay.
Immortality has come to late,
it's a yearn one learns to sate.
A decision I hope I burn in hell with
forever.

I fell in love,
my heart flew away as if a dove.
I pleaded to God to let me stay
to let my love live another day.
He granted my request
told me it wasn't the for the best.
Now I wish to grow old,
but I know my soul's already been sold
forever.

For now my love can never see,
that I'm an angel, cursed to be.
My love is dead and gone,
 now I see I was in the wrong.
I see the laughter galore,
but in my heart I know one day they'll be no more.
One day I wish to die,
and let another desperate soul let a day pass by.
One day I hope they'll learn,
that one day they'll all burn.


© 2010 SomerSunshine


Author's Note

SomerSunshine
Another look on immortality.

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I like the lines:
For now my love can never see,
that I'm an angel, cursed to be.
Well penned

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomerSunshine

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

You are quite welcome.
this was written really well. Very deep and dark. loved it. keep up the good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is a very powerfully voiced piece. an amazing piece that i will never get tired of reading it over and over again. very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 15, 2010
Last Updated on December 5, 2010
Tags: Teen, Angels, Immortality, Love

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SomerSunshine
SomerSunshine

MN



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My name is Somer, and I'm just a girl from Minnesota. I love to write, and one day I hope to become an author. I like stories with a lot of feeling, and run-on sentences. So hopefully my stories h.. more..

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