HANGED

Here is a piece I wrote about giving up and suicide. Hold on.

Ropes up, hopes out
Silent screams, no shouts
No choice, full of doubts
Stress in, panic bouts
"I quit", on the sheets
"Needs help", he repeats
Long nights, he cried
On the fan a rope he tied
Gave up, he died
One option- Suicide.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the theme you have written on. But I would like to mention that suicide is not an option. By the end of reading this poem I kind of felt that you mentioned suicide as an option to end pain I know you didn't mean to convey it but as a reader that thought came in my mind so I wanted to share. It's just a thought not any sort of criticism. Please don't feel offended.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thanj you for the review. Will definitely keep this in mind while penning next time :)
I am so happy you read my works :)

[Najam Us Saher]

It's my pleasure. I am happy you didn't feel bad for the point that I have mentioned.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Not at all :)