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Strange

Strange

A Poem by Sonakshi Arora
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We are alone in a world full of people

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Strange isn't it?
That it is 2 am and I can't find my aim
A time when I cant really understand anything
And nothing that I can really blame
Strange isn't it?
I have loads of friends online
But none really bother too much
To ask me if I'm doing fine
Strange isn't it?
That I followed your word
But when I was the one screaming
You actually never heard
Strange isn't it?
That all the deep conversation
Never ever actually led to a
Long lasting natural connection
Strange isn't it?
That even in a world full of souls
There are these indescribable moments
When we ourselves fill the gruesome hole
When we show people that we are content
And full of lively spirit
But deep inside we are alone and sad
Strange isn't it?

© 2017 Sonakshi Arora


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Sonakshi Arora
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"Strange isn't it?
That even in a world full of souls
There are these indescribable moments
When we ourselves fill the gruesome hole"

I think it's not strange. I would say it's quite a normal thing. But it's like we're so intent on moving beyond that we sort of forget those around us only too often.
I totally agree with your description. Deep write which made me think :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! 😍😍
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Years Ago

You're welcome :)



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It covered the most thought over questions of life anybody could relate to...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I see you are new here. Welcome to Writers Cafe :)
Shwetz

5 Years Ago

Thank u so much :)
Based on realism... totally agreed with all the facts... very nicely written

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much 😄
Its simply amazing..the way you penned down the poem made think about it..It truly spellbounded me

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much :D
Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

I see you've​ come online after quote a long time ;)
Sofia

5 Years Ago

Yeah I was really busy with my exams and then I didn't want to login. Also I forgot my Writerscafe p.. read more
Current situation is described. The world is becoming small and no time for emotions...nicely penned 👌

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much :D
Bhagyashree Bhat

5 Years Ago

You are Welcome 😊
The way technology has drifted people apart today is really saddening . And the way we are unable to connect to people how we used to. Its really deep and makes the reader think


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I agree with you :)
"Strange isn't it?
That even in a world full of souls
There are these indescribable moments
When we ourselves fill the gruesome hole"

I think it's not strange. I would say it's quite a normal thing. But it's like we're so intent on moving beyond that we sort of forget those around us only too often.
I totally agree with your description. Deep write which made me think :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! 😍😍
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
wow, this is fantastic, I'm really enjoying your work - this poem is so true and I think anyone, at some points in their lives can relate to this - you have a natural gift :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! 😍😍😍
When we show people that we are content
And full of lively spirit
But deep inside we are alone and sad
Strange isn't it?

I think it happens only if you choose to mask yourself. I think life is simple and shady not all days are the same and not every moment is incredible yet we learn a lot in life if we learn to move ahead without holding anything heart and mind. Let go, live free. You wrote a nice poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much :D

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Added on March 13, 2017
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Tags: materialistic, sad, Lonely, depressed

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Sonakshi Arora
Sonakshi Arora

Navi Mumbai, India



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