Why Is Everything So Right?

Why Is Everything So Right?

A Poem by Sonakshi Arora
"

I guess I'll never stop cribbing....

"
I feel like writing is my life
And sadness is my inspiration
But what do I write about now?
Because life is at its perfection

Nothing wrong is happening now
No-one is using and throw
My life is pretty happy now
What to write about, I just don't know?

Everyone is being good to me
And people are in touch
My creativity skills is going down
But what to do ? Life is such

But hey wait! There was a time when I wrote
"When will life treat me well?"
And now that it is being good to me
I think all of this is sheer hell!

I guess perfection is a flaw
And all things good do make me frown
Because I have no topic to write on
And my stats are going down

Life like this is pretty boring
I guess I need some sadness and dirt
Or life like this will kill me one day
It'll make me very mad and hurt

No one is troubling now
No one is taking behind me
I guess I've always been so sad
That now I can't digest being happy

Sigh. I think I'll never stop cribbing
No matter how good things are
Maybe I'll have to change my ways
Or satisfaction will be very far


© 2017 Sonakshi Arora


Author's Note

Sonakshi Arora
Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

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lovely! a beautiful poem!
In some way i think we will always need challenges... or "Life like this is pretty boring"
but, i feel that the challenges don't need to be sad or bad! so I suppose you real need, as you say :
" I'll have to change my ways"


Posted 7 Years Ago


Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

Completely agreed! Thanks for dropping by and reviewing it😃😄😍
angelina neves

7 Years Ago

it is my pleasure!
Yes....beautifully written as always. I truly liked this a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much 😄😄
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You are always welcome. I guessed you were asleep because last poem I read of yours is on my mind..... read more
What to write about, I just don't know? Hahahah...then a great conclusion...satisfaction will be very far...a good one :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much 😄
Such an amazing write! You know what? No one wants a life with no struggle in it, in my opinion. I loved this poem, so much. You're such a great writer. I don't think I also would be able to write, if I don't have any problems in my life. Keep writing!😊

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! 😍😍😍
Anjali

7 Years Ago

Your welcome

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Added on April 1, 2017
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Tags: Crib, perfection, flaw, dissatisfied

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Sonakshi Arora
Sonakshi Arora

Navi Mumbai, India



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