Stop

Build me up just to break me down

Bring me in just to take me out

Love me just to hurt me

And yet you think you can still turn me

 

In your thoughts

You devise plans that will be lost

On an unmovable person

All your tries will fail

My individual will avail.

 

How many ways will you try?

To stop this will one have to die?

II'll be fighting til my end

For to lose myself would be my greatest sin

 

Your sickness isn't contagious

Your pain can't touch my name

Your anger is yours to keep

I won't let it consume me

 

Stop trying to mold me

You'll never get your hold on me

My dreams are all only for me

Not you not us not we

 

Living life like I'm dying

Ignoring all your lying

The foil to all your trying

Loosening this knot your tying

 

Around my neck

Put it on your own

It's not my fault

You lost your home

It's nothing that can be changed

But you don't have to act the same

As those who hurt you.

Reviews

[*Evelen*]

Wow you are a very good writer. Well done again!:) This is a poem that many people can relate to. Some peole are mean and they use other persons sadness just to make them feel better. My favorite part was this;

"In your thoughts

You devise plans that will be lost

On an unmovable person

All your tries will fail

My individual will avail."

I like how you said that their plans to tear you down will fail. Good job.

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Again, really good work from you. But I'm pretty sure this is a poem not a song (also seeing as you didn't say anything about it being a song anywhere.)
You are very good.

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