Lithium

Let me go and tell me to stay.

"Let me go

I want to be free

Let me go

This is how it has to be

I can't keep doing this

I can't go on

Just one last kiss

before the sun breaks the dawn

Tell me to leave

Tell me to stay

Tell me you hate me,

I hate seeing you this way.

I'll miss you forever

Of that, I know,

I'll love you always and-"

"Don't you dare go,"

You grab me and pull me in again,

"Its time to take a stand."

You kiss me like when we first met,

you hold me close and say "Don't you ever forget,

I'm going to stay with you

No matter what you do,

Don't say you're alone,

as long as you're with me,

You're safe and my own."

Author's Note

Off the top of my head... I like it :) Thoughts please?

Reviews

[Voice11]

Very well written. Especially with the sudden stop and change of character. Great work!

[Tallulah]

I love this. It has such great flow. This is great.

[Anjel]

love the flow of the conversation and yet there is a bit of the action involved. well done!

[Lexi Nicole]

Very interesting. I like how you organized the different parts with colors. The flow is great, nice write!

-Howl

[Amber Nicole]

Aww. So sweet. For something just off the top of your head it is pretty good.

[Bud]

I like it! I like how it is a conversation between two people...a well written piece of art! Keep up the outstanding works of your art! : >)