Step With Me

Step With Me

A Poem by Marlena
"

We'll take baby steps but we'll get there. Everyone needs a little help sometimes.

"

Step with me,

one, two, three

step with me,

keep the rhythm,

keep it going,

Stay strong.

Step with me

one

two

three

stay with me,

stand tall.

 

© 2009 Marlena


Author's Note

Marlena
Baby steps. ^^ Just supposed to be about how some people like to do things on their own when they really need help.

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Yah I get that. I think it is a really nice piece. Very simple and sweet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was unique, short, and interesting. You portrayed both the helpless and helpful using a technique we're all familiar with on a daily bases..."learning."

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Excellent! I can see multiple meanings in this, too!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very nice! Simple, but it gets the point across. It flows really well, too. Good work!

-Howl

Posted 15 Years Ago



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