Stranger

Hey Stranger,

walking down the street

what's your name?

Hey Stranger, hope no one sees you

walking down the street

with your head down

bearing the wind

the rain is a friend of yours

Hey Stranger,

Does anyone know your true name?

Doesn't anyone know you?

Hey Stranger,

give me a rhyme and I'll sing you a song

Hey Stranger,

give the time and I can be a friend.

Author's Note

Yeah....There's this lady in my town that is a patient at the mental institute (it's shut down but there are houses on the property for the patients) and I see her walking literally EVERYWHERE so when I saw her coming out of the library all of the sudden this little voice in my head said "Hey Stranger" and I thought "Damn....POEM TIME!" so....yeah XDDD What do you think? Comments? Crit?

Reviews

[Voice11]

Hey Stranger, who are you? Riku?? lol

I liked it, very nice flow and the format is great for this poem.

[Lexi Nicole]

Very sweet poem. I love it, and I love the burst of inspiration for it coming from that patient. Good work. ^^

-Howl

[L.I. Black]

I love the inspiration for it, it's actually sweet really.
It also give me story ideas lol, but no worries I won't steal that.
I really like the poem itself. It has a nice feel to and great emotion.