Clean

Clean

A Poem by Marlena
"

Thought it up in the shower :)

"

Make me whole, create me new

peel away the dirt

so I can come through

Burn me with the water or whatever you have to do

Just make me clean again

Just make me -me- again

© 2009 Marlena


Author's Note

Marlena
Again, thought it up in the shower XD Comments? Crit? I'll probably expand later, if I can think of anything good for it. ^_^

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Perfect! Days where stress makes you sweat and pull your hair out, a nice shower wipes it all away and repairs it for another day

Posted 15 Years Ago


very cool almost like a prayer.. very peaceful like... like cleansing your soul... liked this alot though... deep but uplifting.. nice work!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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