Worthless

I miss the feel of your skin

and I can't wait to break again

so I won't need to make amends

I'll just wait to be whole again.

You can call me lazy, I say I'm tired

I'm worn out, hardly inspired

How can I try when I have no strength?

When I have no drive I can't go to such length.

You can call me what you want, I really don't care

I'm tired of lying to people because it just isn't fair

I'm not a kid so don't tell me how to behave,

I am worthless and I don't deserve to be saved.

Author's Note

:P What do you think??

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Absolutely beautiful poem...

[Bud]

I may not know you that well or anything much about you, but I do know you're worth saving. Doesn't matter which angle you look at if from. Okay, now to the review:

Outstanding! This one has the poetic feel that it was written verbatim emotionally. It is an Excellent piece showing one reflecting on the miss that has taken place while separated from their loved one. The emptiness shows, and can be felt. Just as all of it can. Keep up the Astonishing works of art!

[Surrealstorm]

such strong emotions...i remember feeling this way and still do sometimes. I hope that you feel better *hugs*.

[Georgia Gypsy]

What emotion runs through this!....leaves me going ...wow---what did i just read?...
A full on leave me alone, hug me kind of piece---feelings of self doubt, and the growing pains of who am i plastered all across this one!!...

you really know how to delve deep and cut to the point of how things feel, it really touches me, and makes me think of when i had those exact feelings at your age!...
Great job....