Cold

Is it cold and lonely here?

Or am I just being myself again?

I can't really tell anymore

because the air turned gray this morning

and just as the clouds melted away into the sky

all one color and no longer themselves

I've melted away into this mirror

these puddles.

Water on the wind

and nothing else.

 

 

Reviews

[Daniel Gardner]

I agree with the previous comment. It does have a slightly mysterious feel to it. Good job.

[Kristin]

i actually really liked this. it's almost sounds mysterious.

"water on the wind
and nothing else."

really liked those last two lines.

nice job