His Fatal AshesA Poem by Sel WhiteleyThis poem is an old one. I was reminded of it by two poems one mentioned building the other tuberculosis. As an old poem, it is quite weak and any suggestions for improvement would be welcomed. Sorry to write so much about illness tonight.This coat staves off more than just the cold night. He coughs all the bloodied phlegm from his lungs and life. He is alone, crying, despairing as a child. In the brimstone of dawn construction sites he long laboured to escape the fatal ashes of his poverty. No different from the ragged urchins a century ago, locked into cleaning the shafts of Victorian chimneys, till their lungs couldn't cope.
He tiptoed the high scaffolding, roofing four hours before school. Tonight in a room balmy with medicine, his lungs bleed tuberculosis and it has all become too much.
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