Haven

Cruel Awakening to the moutain tops

unable to breathe , as my intentions grow stronger

my needs, my ever lasting dreams , i have him next to me

our strong bonds

we're best friends

we're each others haven

our world that we have created is now our heaven on earth

he held me tightly against him from behind

his arms wraped around me like if i was gonna jump off the mountain clife

and he's holding on to dear life for me

the strong wind blows my dress and my hair every where

my hair....difrent shades of red , to oranger to strawberry blonde to blood red

the sun makes it look like fire

my angel smiles at the scent the wind blows to him

orchids

my hair gives off the scent of blossming white orchids

but my lips, my cherry red lips gives him a taste of vanilla as he wrap his lips around mine

he could never grasp how i taste and smell  because every time it hits him  right in the face and gets him so excited and so happy

He kiss my neck , my soft neck

heh says that when he kisses there he never wants to stop

he quivers after that last kiss he gives my neck and all is done

he's done

he's spell bound  to me on this moutain.

True lovers

He got me on his arms and right now...theres nothing more i rather do than savor his touch...his kiss....his scent he left behind on my body.

I never want to let go.

He's my haven

 

 

Reviews

[Fernando Pessoa]

It's always amazed me that two people in love can lock out the rest of the world and make their own island of solitude. You've got something good and you write about it so eloquently.

Michel de Montaigne: “My home...It is my retreat and resting place from wars, I try to keep this corner as a haven against the tempest outside, as I do another corner in my soul.”

[DamienHino]

Wow I love the imagery you emphasize these points and make them sound so ineffable
"he held me tightly against him from behind"
"as he wrap his lips around mine"

[J.S. Pua]

great imagery..
great write..

[Steve]

Mmmmmm so sweet!

Like a great love story.....

[sammyj]

great imagery

[Frantzuu]

wow this is a lovely piece of writting, I like the imagery in this piece, stunning!!! :D

[Jonathan Ballam]

I enjoyed the wrestle of love and words. This poem seems to be one of those that has a wiff of the erotic.

Lovely tight ending ;)

[Cody Wiggins]

WOW man i had chills all over you basically described the way it was when i kiss my girlfriend. But my gosh the imagery i swear the beautiful colors that i could see in my head it was amazing. Im still shaking a little. I could really almost smell everything you described so basically what im trying to say is

Damn this poem rulez lol great job

[Antonio Valentino]

What a romantic you are. An enchaniting piece, very tranquil and embracing. Wonderful job Lexi, thanks for sharing.

Antonio

[TamerQtaish]

loved the imaginary you used... Very detailed piece,
Totally loved it...

Great job, keep it up

All the best,
Tamer