The Perfect End

Yesterday, I wrote a letter
in my mind.
The script was Rubenesque,
Each curling letter
Sensuous, soft, beckoning.
The pace began softly..
Rolling off the tongue
like Honey
or Chocolate
or rich smooth Cream.
Then it began to Thunder,
every word Pounding
down and around,
Deeper, and Faster, twisting
with those Dangerous Curves.
It was a flood gate
of Passion, and joy
Misery and hope.
It was over all too soon.
I had no words to end it,
no blithe signature
or Small Endearment..
So I've tucked it away -
those last glorious,
tortured, euphoric lines
hanging, and waiting
For The Perfect End.

Author's Note

Since I'm new here, I just wanted to say that capitalization for emphasis is done on purpose :) Thanks!

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

Ha, I can't say what this brought to mind because it would be way off target! Okay I see I had a good day at work, anyway I loved the flow of this one, it was fast and yet timely I could see this being read out loud. Excellent write and one day you have to find an ending for the letter in your head.

[KAREN]

Another solid write, good job!!