Word Crap

i'm creatively constipated... so here's my word crap

 

Melancholy lollipops

sticky sweet thoughts

pull the chain and watch

liquid words

swirl the drain

toilet trees-paper pen

my necessities

I bury them in the back yard

like a dog in heat

scratch my blue balls

in need of creative release

attack of the rusty fleas..

 

bathroom break

I’ll be back…

courtesy flush

before I release more word crap

Author's Note

plop and flush!!

Reviews

[Lex]

Very funny.
Scratch my blue balls, classic line.

Liked it.

[Raef C. Boylan]

haha
a clever concept
metaphorical s**t
for the creativity being excreted
that you can't take pride in

i think you've done a good job
with the imagery
in this piece
the dog-related stuff especially
made me smile

i like how
in reality
"bathroom break" is what interrupts the release of 'word crap'
whilst in the poem
because of the toilet metaphor
the whole thing is kind of a bathroom break

yeah
good work
not amazing but no way is it just 'word crap'