Clear Skies?

Clear Skies?

A Poem by Spoken
"

when things start to go well sometimes i wonder how long it will last

"

The clouds stomped away today
nothing but the distant rumble of their feet remain
to humble me
I remember the thunder
and the chill
I know it like it remains still
though the sun warms the damp of  my eye
there will always be a part of me
that lies huddled underneath the blankets
shaking
fearing the wind will change
knowing somewhere out there
the skies are not clear

© 2013 Spoken


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Oh yes dear life you could never count on,times its so good to you,and times you wonder how bad it could turn..
I loved the way you put those ideas so creatively..
Clouds passed away only for the day..could hear the distant rumble of their feet
I still remember the thunder and the chill,though I see now the sun starting to warm me
But always part of me will huddle underneath the thick cover shaking
And fearing the wind could change its mind anytime now
for I know the skies somewhere out there will never be clear at all
lovely thoughts ,lovely write..

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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sounds like you're looking for the dark cloud in the silver linings. but i do relate to the feeling. sometimes it seems that calms are only those moments before storms. you expressed that nicely here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i really like this piece and again very well done imagery in this piece ... it really stands out to me in this piece... nice job...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh yes dear life you could never count on,times its so good to you,and times you wonder how bad it could turn..
I loved the way you put those ideas so creatively..
Clouds passed away only for the day..could hear the distant rumble of their feet
I still remember the thunder and the chill,though I see now the sun starting to warm me
But always part of me will huddle underneath the thick cover shaking
And fearing the wind could change its mind anytime now
for I know the skies somewhere out there will never be clear at all
lovely thoughts ,lovely write..

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow I know this feeling all to well, life always seems to find a way to shake things up just when you life is smooth sailing. A wonderfully expressed piece of writing. Nice seeing you back.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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