My One Desire

I’m the crust, and you are the topping; your hot, tangy sauce has my love atoms popping!

I’m a fiery comet of love inviting you along for a ride. Hop on my wings, and hold on tight as I fly straight into your heart and emerge as a glorious sunrise in the tropical skies of your deep smoldering eyes.Woman, you are my heart’s one desire, and transform my flame into a roaring fire.

Reviews

[Vaidehi]

Lovely! Completely romantic.

[Hayley]

Wow! This really flows well with the rhyme, and the imagery is fantastic! I kind of imagined Aladdin while reading this, on a magical flying carpet. Amazing job :)

[Sukriti Suki]

I am liking your work. To the point and makes a point massively.

[Coyote Poetry]

A short and to the point poem of love. No wasted words. Just a strong desire to take a love on a good journey. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

such love expressed here! Wonderful!

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wow - what a glorious chorus of words!

[SpokenWord]

I can truly relate to this poem, as women motivate me to greatness too. To be interwove with one as you have written here is paradise on earth. It is a feeling of being completed. Great write.