You're my bright sun of love

I am your spout,
and you are my whale,
I am your pilsner,
and you are my ale,
I am your river,
and you are my vale,
I am your raindrops,
and you are my hail.
I am your thunder,
and you are my gale.
You are my body,
and I am your tail.
You are my ocean whenever I flail,
You're the calm in my mind when I wanna bail,
You are my ship, and I am your sail,
You're my bright sun of love whenever I pale.

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

Sweet and tender poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The description made the poem a pleasure to read.
"I am your pilsner,
and you are my ale,"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Vaidehi]

Reminds me so much of a song I've heard. Very nice and very romantic.:)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, this is good! :)

[LA Lorena]

LOL! I love this, except if I were the "she" in this poem, I may oobject to being called your "whale". Hopefully, this does not land you in the dog house! ;)

[Lilly Negoi]

perfect balance - yin and yang :)

[Chloe]

I love it. Soft spoken and really heart warming!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really beautiful and sweet!