Wanna Play?

I love to kiss your tender skin; my heart melts when you let me in.

Wanna Play?
Ok.
I'll be the ball,
you be the glove.
I'll toss myself high,
into the sky up above
I'll soar high like an eagle,
and smile like a dove,
then plunge into the depths,
of your hot liquid love.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

the last two lines made me smile. I like the playful way that you wrote this. YOur poetry is usually fun and whimsical.

[Sukriti Suki]

your poems are fun! A delight to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic of this poem. You were direct and the goal was simple.
"then plunge into the depths,
of your hot liquid love."
A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Short and cool and awesome picture again!

[Vaidehi]

Hot liquid love? Very vivid!! I like the way you couple the mundane with the lofty in your writing.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Yummy, passionate poem
"Hot liquid love"
I get everything you said here, but won't go into details
I liked it

[KAREN]

A playful poem that brings a smile to my lips! Very well done!!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wow! A hot one! Love it!

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing!