let me in sweet darlin'

you race though my veins
like a manic fire truck
my eyes smoking from the engine
of your torrid passion
fire hoses squirting out my skin
let me in sweet darlin'
fling the ladder from your pounding heart
climb into my vacant mind
strip me naked and fling me
into your bubbling inferno
your liquid lava seething
every sweet cell breathing me in
as I slowly rise,
and dive into your
silky undulations
microscopic penetrations
wrap yourself around me
and catapult me deep
into your long forgotten sleep
let me in sweet darlin'
envelop me completely
my senses scintillating
corpuscles palpitating
drown me with your magic potion
breathe me like a dragon
soak me with your moist emotion
and lift my heart
high
into the tranquil eye
of your whirling swirling hurricane
let me in sweet darlin

Reviews

[Bertie]

Wow, incredibly raw and racey ! I enjoyed it, the words seem tangible and I can almost taste them coming off my tongue ! It was even better the second time through as reading it again brought to light the subtleties of the piece that I'd missed the first time, having been so astounded and swept away by the pace and electric energy of the piece.
I really enjoyed this :)

[Poetic Beauty]

The inferno of emotions is clearly stated in this poem. It speaks of a great need that must be fulfilled. The poem is very descriptive and sends the mind an array of images.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words and powerful emotion in this poem. The words were direct and to the point. No weakness in this poem. Just the desire to get in. A excellent poem.
Coyote