Or Am I?

Or Am I?

A Poem by StarSandwich

Words are to easy to say,
But for us at first we couldn't even say hay.
My feelings I kept at bay.
One more hug? is that too much to ask.
Another kiss? is that too much a task.
Your my price of the darkness,
the one who caused me madness.

Don't you see that my smile is broken?
Just remembering the words you've spoken.
So I'll ask once more, before you show me the door.
One more hug? can I ask.
One last kiss? a little task.

Because we both know I've left the darkness,
and I'm though with all this madness.

"Or Am I?"

© 2011 StarSandwich


Author's Note

StarSandwich
Another note pad writing from last night.

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we all have had our smile broken at some time in our life just as long as we can fix it again everything will be all right
like this a lot
tk

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awwwww! Good write. Sad yet good..

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it. Well done!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Can relate, love it! :) Keep writing xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


hummmn can relate to how you feel a lot nice one star !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it!!! and the word darkness is one of my favs as well :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really can relate to it! Very nice poem! :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago



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