Desire.

This is new, & I'm not too sure about it. honest opinions & reviews please.?

"Baby."
That's all you have to say. One simple word from your mouth can take my breath away.

"Yes Babe."
I reply. I love the look in your deep green eyes and I know I'll be with you for all of my days.

"I love you,"
Three words now. Barely remembering how to count. I'm hypnotized by your voice & your heartbeat, that sweet, calm sound.

"I love you more."
Going on four. We kiss & we walk towards the door. I can't believe I found you. Can't believe I found my prince and at such a young age, and girl would kill for this.

"I'll see you next weekend"
He says last, While my heart is racing and times moving past. One week is forever for another perfect date.

Author's Note

This is new, & I'm not too sure about it. honest opinions & reviews please.?

Reviews

[Tapher]

i believe it was absolutely splendid :) i enjoyed the emotion of love and who we are when were around those we love

[Distant horizons]

It's beautiful. Nice concept, counting the words increase. Really like this.

[Clayton Bardwell]

4th stanza, last sentence, "and girl would kill for this." Did you mean "any" girl?

[Destinyxi]

A poem with a story, great job :)

[Michael Thrower]

very sweet :P

[Mike]

I personally like this the count of the words to describe your feeling as you actually say the word its a really nice read