Desire.

Desire.

A Poem by StephanieDenise
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This is new, & I'm not too sure about it. honest opinions & reviews please.?

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"Baby."
That's all you have to say. One simple word from your mouth can take my breath away.

"Yes Babe."
I reply. I love the look in your deep green eyes and I know I'll be with you for all of my days.

"I love you,"
Three words now. Barely remembering how to count. I'm hypnotized by your voice & your heartbeat, that sweet, calm sound.

"I love you more."
Going on four. We kiss & we walk towards the door. I can't believe I found you. Can't believe I found my prince and at such a young age, and girl would kill for this.

"I'll see you next weekend"
He says last, While my heart is racing and times moving past. One week is forever for another perfect date.


© 2012 StephanieDenise


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StephanieDenise
This is new, & I'm not too sure about it. honest opinions & reviews please.?

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i believe it was absolutely splendid :) i enjoyed the emotion of love and who we are when were around those we love

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's beautiful. Nice concept, counting the words increase. Really like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


4th stanza, last sentence, "and girl would kill for this." Did you mean "any" girl?

Posted 10 Years Ago


A poem with a story, great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sweet :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I personally like this the count of the words to describe your feeling as you actually say the word its a really nice read

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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StephanieDenise
StephanieDenise

Goldsboro, NC



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I'm 16 & I love to write. I write to heal my soul & I write to heal others. Words are not only words to me but they are everything. You are mostly defined not by your actions, but words. So therefore,.. more..

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