Flawed, I am

Flawed, I am 

Flawed, I am

But aren’t we all?

No matter the person,

Big or small.

 

So don’t be one

To criticize one’s faults.

For it will be you

Who needs to be taught.

 

Taught the lesson

Or rather a simple rule.

If you cannot say anything nice

Then don’t say anything at all.

 

In the end

The truth will stand.

The truthful words

Flawed, I am. 

Author's Note

-This is the first poem I have ever written.-
-What do you all think?-

Reviews

[RenegadeEscape]

The flow is nice and the simplicity of the message refreshing. Thank you for sharing and look forward to seeing more of your work.

[Stephanie]

Thank you! Thank you for taking the time to do a review-- I appreciate it!

[nightshade]

I liked it. you made it really flow and its simplicity really brings out the truth of your words. for your first poem ever this one is pretty good I'd love to read more poems by you.

[Stephanie]

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

[Haley Wilson]

I can imagine many people would relate strongly to this, as the message is profound and powerful. Excellent work for your first ever poem!

[Stephanie]

Thank you so much!!

[Jen]

Very nice poem! It has good flow, the meaning and message are good. I really enjoyed this, please share another!

[Stephanie]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

There is a lot of truth in your words here. And for some reason it kinda sounds like a jaunty little tune or a nursery rhyme. Good Job.

[Stephanie]

Thank you so much!

[micky]

Oh this is a fun little piece i really love this poem...well done,the flow is lovely as well