Heaven

Wrote this after seeing a competition on here, rather inspiring topic.

 

A world in which I’ll never want

Or even know desire.

Contentedness and peace

It fills my soul, raises me higher.

 

Ill never see a frown, or anger,

Show unhappy face.

Ill never witness any pain

Not while I’m in this place.

 

Perfect corridors end in white

And beings that are purely light

Makes no difference day or night

Time is but a whisper

 

Surrounded by the ones I love

Observe the living from above

I smile and know that I am home

I now with life’s creator roam

Reviews

[Lorraine]

While I say your idea of a paradise is quite typical, what I like about this is the way you described it in your own way. Very inspiring. These kinds of poems make me hopeful, and believe more that somewhere above, there really is a place so perfect, and that someday, I'll be there too. Great Job.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[LadyNaida]

Wow, I love this poem is amazing. Very beautiful indeed.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Absolutely beautiful. Your description of Heaven is beautiful.