NIGHTMARES

NIGHTMARES

A Screenplay by Steven Sallie
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A mother is concerned over her son's curious behavior.

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INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

We’re inside a young boy's dream bedroom.  Model planes hang from the ceiling, superhero posters cover the walls.  The bed has a race car frame.

Sitting on his knees in the bed, KEVIN (8), back turned to us, draws on the wall with RED CRAYON.  His back blots out the view of the drawing. 


INT. LAUNDRY ROOM - NIGHT

EMMA (30's), gathers the clothing from the dryer.  She folds it into a laundry basket, humming to herself.


INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

Kevin continues to scribble.  The low SCRAPING of the crayon SCREECHES like nails on a chalkboard.  


INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

Emma, laundry basket on her hip, maneuvers between the couch and coffee table, heading towards the staircase.  


INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

Kevin still hasn't moved.  The sound of the crayon SKIDDING across the wall INTENSIFIES. 


INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT

Emma reaches the top landing.  She moves down the hall toward Kevin's room.  
The door is open slightly -- a small sliver of light peaks through onto the hardwood floor.

Emma stops and gently knocks on the door.

EMMA  
Sweetheart, you're clothes are done.

No answer.

Emma knocks again.

EMMA (CONT'D)
Kevin...?

Emma opens the door and enters...


INT. BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS

...to find Kevin drawing on the walls.

Emma rolls her eyes.  She sets the laundry basket on the floor.  

EMMA
Kevin, what are you doing?!  You know better 
than that!  What have I told you about
drawing on the walls?

She walks up behind Kevin, peering over his shoulder.  She finally sees what he has drawn --

A STICK FIGURE OF A WOMAN -- BOTH EYES CROSSED OUT WITH AN "X" -- BENT SIDEWAYS AT A STRANGE ANGLE.

Emma stares, concerned.

EMMA (CONT'D)
What is that suppose to be?
Still nothing.  

EMMA (CONT'D)
Answer me!

Emma grabs Kevin by the arms and turns him around to face her.  His eyes look HAZY, UNFOCUSED.

KEVIN
It's the woman who lives under the 
bed, mommy.

EMMA
Honey, there's nothing under the bed.  

KEVIN
You can look if you want to.

Emma stares at Kevin.

EMMA
Fine.  Just to prove there’s nothing 
under there. 

Emma gets on all fours beside the bed.  She grabs the blanket and lifts it --

SHE SCREAMS.

THE MANGLED, ROTTING FACE OF A WOMAN LOOKS BACK AT HER, GRINNING FROM EAR TO EAR, EXPOSING YELLOW, CROOKED TEETH.

The WOMAN lunges forward.

On his bed, Kevin, putting the finishing touches on his drawing, SMILES.


INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT

In the darkness, Emma lets out a BLOOD-CURDLING SCREAM, thrashing back and forth, deep in the midst of her NIGHTMARE.

A lamp on the night stand is suddenly CLICKED on by Kevin.   He stares at his mother with a concerned look on his face.

Kevin climbs into bed and gently shakes his mother --

KEVIN    
Mommy?  Mommy?

Kevin shakes her a little bit harder, finally jostling her awake.  

Emma stares around the room, confused and terrified.  A look of realization comes over her face as she takes in the walls of her room and her son's innocent face.

KEVIN (CONT'D)
Are you all right?

EMMA
(breathing hard)
Yes. 

KEVIN
Why were you screaming like that?

EMMA
I had a bad dream.

KEVIN
What about?

EMMA
It's not important.  

Kevin shrugs.

KEVIN
Okay.

Kevin climbs off the bed, heading toward the door.

EMMA
You wanna stay in here tonight?  Mommy
  could use the company.

Kevin stops.  He turns back to his mother.  

KEVIN
But you never let me sleep in here.

EMMA
Tonight, I’ll make a special exception. 

KEVIN
Okay.

Kevin scrambles back into bed, getting comfortable beside his mother.  Emma tucks her son in and flicks off the lamp,  getting comfortable herself.

KEVIN (CONT'D)
Mommy...?

EMMA
Yes?

KEVIN
I'm glad you let me sleep in here 
tonight.

EMMA
Why's that?

KEVIN
The woman under my bed scares me.


SMASH TO BLACK.

THE END.

© 2016 Steven Sallie


Author's Note

Steven Sallie
Thought I'd do something fun for Halloween.

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Cyd
Nothing about this bothered me. That is usually the case, there's always something that can be better but I think worked from start to finish. Straight to the point, simple, not making it overcomplicated.

Spotted one little slip, “Kevin climbs of bed, heading toward the door.” Forgot a F on off.

I thought it was really charming.


Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Steven Sallie

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words. Lol, yeah I didn't catch that.



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3X3MPLER is right, you should turn this into a short film if you possibly could one day. It's something driven out of an innocent sort of literal nightmare that even adults still have today but won't speak of.

Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Steven Sallie

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I found out today that I made finalist in that film festival. Now I'm nervous.. read more
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Cyd
Nothing about this bothered me. That is usually the case, there's always something that can be better but I think worked from start to finish. Straight to the point, simple, not making it overcomplicated.

Spotted one little slip, “Kevin climbs of bed, heading toward the door.” Forgot a F on off.

I thought it was really charming.


Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Steven Sallie

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words. Lol, yeah I didn't catch that.
Great little story. Black as night.
Well done.Alan


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it.you should turn it into a clip

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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