My Babygirl

My Babygirl

A Poem by Moonbeam Rose
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Writen for my loving wife.

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Sitting here I watch you.

The love of my life,

I watch you wither away

before my very eyes.

 

Helpless to save you

From all that pains you

I wish that I could help you

Though I don't know how.

 

Watching you suffer

From this illness

I wish it was me instead of you

To cry in bed all day

 

How can I raise your spirits

When all you seem to do

Is curl up and not say a word.

Baby, talk to me please

 

I need to hear your words

Need to know that you are okay

I need to see that smile

Shine on your lovely face again.

 

Baby, please don't cry.

Just dry your lovely brown eyes

Stay with me my love

Don't let your depression tak you away

 

Baby, I'm begging.

Something you know I never do

Just stay my babygirl

For I will always love you.

© 2008 Moonbeam Rose


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Ben
I read stuff like this and wish I had what you have. But I know one day, I shall have what you have. This shows the deep love you have for Angel. Sometimes the only thing we can do for those we love is watch them go through their own pains. Sadly, this is the only things you can do for Angel. I wish there was more I could tell you. Just always remember that I am here for you both. I love you. Benny.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Very touching and very beautiful, this love that shines from your writing...great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw. This made me cry! Very loving tribute, and I could imagine MY wife in your place cuz I'm the one who suffers from the depression. Obviously, I hadn't taken her into account. Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everytime that I read this I want to cry my eyes out. You are so good to me my love and I do not deserve you or all the patience you give to me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like the feelings in this one, I can almost hear you speaking them to your love. such tormiol inside but at the same time it is beautiful because of the depth of love that shines through within it. I wanted to stop by your site on a recommendation from a friend and I am glad I did you both are good writers.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Ben
I read stuff like this and wish I had what you have. But I know one day, I shall have what you have. This shows the deep love you have for Angel. Sometimes the only thing we can do for those we love is watch them go through their own pains. Sadly, this is the only things you can do for Angel. I wish there was more I could tell you. Just always remember that I am here for you both. I love you. Benny.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

sad, and beautiful. I'm not normally into sad things... but as you could tell Im in that sort of mood tonight.

Great read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I am in tears as I read this my love, just remember I will always be your babygirl no matter how far my depression and mania take me from you. I just with I could tell you I would be alright but I can't because I don't know if I will be at this point in my life or not. I can only promise that, to the best of my knowledge, I will not kill myself because of how afraid of death I am. I am trying to return to you my dear one and I will try even harder to be the woman you fell in love with once again. You are now and forever my one and only, my source of sanity in this cruel, cold world that turns it's back on me with every chance that it gets. I love you baby, remember that no matter how upset I am nothing can ever change that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Moonbeam Rose
Moonbeam Rose

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Hey there, my name is Kat. I love to write, especially fanfiction and poetry. I am a huge Star Wars, Twilight and Harry Potter fan. I also RPG as a few characters in each aspect. I am a very proud Wic.. more..

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