A Vampire's Dark Love

 

When Witches and demons
Ruled the world
the daughter of Satan
Safed me when I feel
A vampire child without wings
My mother betraied me
By throwing me to the sea
As I feel
My father's friend
A wolf by name
Caught me and tossed me
To the land
I landed in a church
Where the preist
Did bless me
And sent me straight
To hell
Once in the fire
Satan's dear child
Did come and spare me.

Reviews

[Charisma Moonfairy]

I still love this one, like I love everything that you do.

[Kitty]

I enjoyed the darkness of this poem. Nice job...

Josie

[Whitney Traylor]

f*** yeah! in all honesty, i feel like i'm in hell everyday. a different one in every place. you seem like you've been through so much but not through an eternity of complete suffering, and i like how it's reflected in your work. keep it up!

[Charisma Moonfairy]

I love this poem my dearest love. Everything about it screams theb story of a vampire lost in the darkness with no one to love them or understand them.

[Dark Daughters]

Stunning work and even if it is a bit chaotic that adds to the charm of the piece.

[Legion]

Not sure about this. Seems to be all over the place. Think you have an interesting idea going on, but may need some rewrite or deciphering.