Numb

Time moving on to the valley of nothingness

All feelings sacrificed into the darkness

Delving too deep into this sullen world

A stab of pain in the chest when the wall

seperating this world from others turns

transparent, Letting one see the world in

which they used to live. Intense sadness,

Intense grace as one moves to look up

for guidance, lost hope as they look down

A tear falls into a pool of streaming tears of

the many who fall victim to the alluring

aura of their minds, creating illusions of hope, then

torturing the soul with despair....

Author's Note

sort of interpretive writing...

Reviews

[Maestro]

AGAIN, sad,yet true!!

[Dionysus Cain]

the way this ended did it for me. itwas a good read but the ending was perfect. i really enjoyed how you used the meaning of th simple word rather than the whole line. that is a great thing to have.

[Marlena]

Very creative and depressing. I like this, though you have a few grammar mistakes, like "losthope" should probably be spaced, "victem" is spelled "victim". Just thought you should know, it takes away from the effect of the writing otherwise. Great job on this though, keep it up!