Here I Am

A little poem about me, it's horrible but eh, might as well get reviews and see how I did.

Here I am
as sweet, friendly girl
who loves squirrels.
Almost forgetting the past
and living right now, in a blast.
For me, every day goes fast.
Got my friends that make my day
I hate people who get there way.
I'm a girl with a huge imagination
and a girl who loves to go on vacation.

Reviews

[MaddyHi]

This was not horrible!! This was a nice poem!! I think that you could have a future in writing. The only thing is "A sweet" not "as" But overall, I am very impressed with this. I love how you expressed yourself and you weren't afraid to write anything down like "...who likes squirrels" That is the best!! Good job again. Keep on writing! I bet you'll get better and better along the way!

[paradise]

Great Ink its really good and its short and simple. i too love squirrels and its true alot of days go fast I agree with this poem fantastic job

[^JAMMIN' BANANAS^ >.<]

hehe... AWESOME!!!!

[Corrupthoughts]

Very to-the-point and not holding anything back. I like the idea of describing oneself through poetry like this and I might just steal the idea. A few things to suggest though. The second line should be "a sweet" instead of "as". Also, 'in a blast' but read better if it was 'having a blast'. I would continue this if I were you

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

funny and adorable!!:)

[Kamie]

Hahah., I love this Stormi. :3

[~Lizzy♬]

I love the line "who loves squirrels" because it made me smile! I love barking squirrels the best though... inside joke sorry... xD Great poem, loved it!

~Lizzard~