Be Mine

this story is about two teens who fall deeply in love after knowing each other for only one day.

I once heard this quote it said " it's funny how someone who was just a stranger a few months ago can mean so much to you now." This quote means so much to me because it explains everything i'm going through. My short love story may be short in words, but it is filled with my everyday experience with love. I may be only 15 years old but I have experienced love. It was 7:00 p.m. i was on my way to a roller skating rink to hang out with my best friend. I arrived at 7:30 and my friend was waiting for me outside. We went into the building, got our skates and started skating. This kid showed up around 8:00 p.m. I have never seen him before but he was kind of cute. I didn't really like him but i thought he was cute. Me and my best friends approached him and asked him what his name was. His name was Zachary, " hey Zachary i haven't seen you around before are you new?" said my friend. " Yes i actually am new." " That's cool, well see you around i guess." I said as me and my friend were leaving to go skate. I new right away we had something, i caught his eye and he caught mine. There was something about him that I liked I just couldn't figure it out. A few minutes later me and friend went out to skate and he is skating to. As we were skating I almost fell until...... I was caught by Zachary. He caught me from falling it was the most magical moment ever. " thank you " I said " No problem any day " he said. After all that happened we went home. The next day me and my friend were walking around campus and I saw Zachary sitting on a bench. I walked over to him and asked him if everything was okay. He said that he was fine he was just feeling a little upset. I said everything is going to be ok as long as you think about the positive in your life and not the negative." So what are some positive things in your life " I said as i looked him in his eyes. " well there is one thing " Zachary said. " yeah and what is that " I said as i was thinking about all the possible answers he could say. He then said " the one positive thing in my life is YOU!." I then said " can ask you a crazy question." He said "sure" I then said "will you go out with me?" "yes i thought you would never ask." A few weeks have gone by and we are still dating. I feel like we are going to together forever. but that all ended  when one day....... 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems and don't judge my writing because im still a young writer and i'm still learning

Reviews

[Joshua Clement]

Nooooo! Why did you end on a cliff hanger? I Loved this, by the way... it leaves me wanting to know so much more! Bravo!