What if

What if

A Poem by WrittenWonderland
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What If...

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What if the sky clears and turn blue
because they pity us, so they hide their pain
and when they are filled to the brim
They fall apart and produce rain

What if in the spring, the reason leaves grow
is that the trees get lonely and finally give in
and then in the Autumn, they have to let go
so that the ground wouldn't have to be alone

What if in the morning, they are tears not dew
because the world  took advantage of the secret time
because it had enough and let out a few
It is sorry but that is not a crime

But not enough with these thoughts 
They are deadly mind droughts
In the end, What and if are two simple words
But put them together and they can break worlds

© 2015 WrittenWonderland


Author's Note

WrittenWonderland
Feedback is greatly appreciated :) Please enjoy!

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Great poem, amazingly written. Giving emotion to the Earth is something I like, mainly because so many people don't care about the Earth. You tied in two words that a lot of people have anxiety over and made it into a really good outlet. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


WrittenWonderland

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
and the rhyming scheme is on point

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! I like this poem. so philosophical. it shook me outta making assumptions for what looks obvious.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WrittenWonderland

8 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
Different context of dear old Mother Nature. Thankfully it might rain when the angels cry because their is so much pain and evil in the world.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WrittenWonderland

8 Years Ago

Hahaha true but always remember that there is always hope ready in the corner :)

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Added on September 4, 2015
Last Updated on October 13, 2015
Tags: Tears, What If, What, If, Pain, Metaphors, Wonder, Thoughts, Thinking, Environment

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WrittenWonderland
WrittenWonderland

Bacolod City, Philippines



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Written Wonderland. Noun, A poet who only wants to share her crazy thoughts with the world, who believes in the freedom of expressing one's self. more..

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