Fighters

Fighters

A Poem by Eleanor Whittaker
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A poem inspired by a Native American song I learnt in a youth group called we are the dead men

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Fighters
We, the fighters, when?
Us, innocent men

Ordered to fight,
filling with fright.

We can’t pretend,
or even defend.

After the order,
there is only disorder

Bullets in our head.
Down amongst the dead.

Down, we were called.
Down, we were pulled.

Down to the dead.
Final tears shed

© 2016 Eleanor Whittaker


Author's Note

Eleanor Whittaker
Yup my poems always seem a bit cringe but oh well, just be honest even if you hate it I don't mind I just want as much feedback as possible!! Thank you.

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Added on April 20, 2016
Last Updated on April 20, 2016
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Eleanor Whittaker
Eleanor Whittaker

United Kingdom



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