The Complexities

Just how bad some of us suck at love

THE COMPLEXITIES

My soul trying so hard to get anonymous at every green light i see

My heart going through a blockade of every new affection i receive 

My ears trying to be deaf at every sweet word i hear

My brain going through a stalemate because its stopping to process 

every new feelings of the new people i meet.

I know i made some mistakes

I know i was not there when you needed me the most

I know life hasn't been fair to both of us

because of the little misconception we had before the collapse of our great empire

Change is constant 

And all you want is all I've still got

Im ready for the new chapter because there is a vacuum in my heart only you can fill

Because I've learnt to love you everyday I live

Author's Note

What do you think? Its my first post here and im really nervous

Reviews

[Malise Haligree]

It has a good start but I feel like the vocabulary you choose bogs down and jumbles the real message.