Alone

Alone

A Poem by Amanda
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Haiku Feel free to not read.

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I am all alone.
What am I supposed to do?
I can’t take much more.

© 2012 Amanda


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There is such a chill in your words... like the night wind in autumn... that loneliness that washes over one... Just made me hope with all my heart that you don't really feel this... or don't feel it anymore. Such a powerful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


:P I read it, and look! I'm even reviewing! XD

okay, now I got that out... This is a really good haiku that is so vivid. I say vivid because I can feel the emotions. I can feel how alone and confused it seem you are in this haiku. I've been there... going there again. It's not fun. but You aren't alone Amanda. I'm here for you. If you ever wanna talk or just need a fried, I'm here. :) great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda

11 Years Ago

Thanks Abbie :))
Abbie

11 Years Ago

Always welcome! ;D
Gives the impression of giving up too easily?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading

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