Get up girl

Just keep fighting.

Get up girl,
And stop your crying.
So what,
They pushed you down,
Just get back up again,
and beat them by ten.

Get up girl,
And stop you’re crying.
What’s the problem,
Didn’t you learn,
You got nothing to lose,
Now you just have to choose.

Sit down girl,
And listen to me.
I’m proud of you,
You faced all your fears,
Wore them down to the bone,
And now, well, welcome home.

Author's Note

um actually i don't know where this came from. Just thinking of random and weird stuff, I guess

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I love the spirit of this poem and your voice in it, loved it!

[Kaylor Mason]

This is awesome! We all have a moment like this in our lives, no matter if you're a girl or guy--I know I certainly did. I've lost track of how many times I had to say these words to myself, lying on the ground because I had to fight just to breathe and get up and walk. Bullying is horrible, and young kids can make the most merciless tormentors on the planet . . . but ya can't give up. Life is never fair; it's always hard and cold. It's just that the alternative is a lot worse.

[darkness*star1985]

This is inspiring work, bully problems are the worst right now in schools, and online. Also its for anyone that is being bully or going though something else, that they shouldnt stop fighting or giving up. very nice work. keep it up.

[Kitty Robinson]

lol great job!

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

I like the directness and bold stand of this poem, the assertiveness stands out. Self Worth is excellently declared and the last lines just exude victory. Very very good!

[Annabelle Lee]

lol random and wierd... you and I would get alojg well.... its actually a really good poem and thouroughly relatable. Very blunt. Admirable.

nice write A.L.

[Sophie]

I like this! It's really cool :) I don't really know what else to say, but I like the last line a lot :)

[Erin Thomas]

it sounds very lyrical! I love the couplets ending each stanza. I love writing this kind of stuff, where is it just random thoughts that end up rhyming.... and well you've got a poem! I really like it! Keep going!

[afra]

good job .....keep writing

[Rhea752]

I really liked it. i could see it as a song. is it a song? Great write keep it up!!

[Amanda]

Yes I admit I was kind of humming a tune to it :)

[Rhea752]

YES!!!