Yon She Came

I don't know when I wrote it...I have just found it today lurking in a back page of some dog-eared school exercise book...I was kind of addled when I wrote it I reckon....

Yon she came I know I think,

Along the pathway I once strode

At the vague thought now I blink

And hope her delight at my humble abode.

Niggling and whinging with my mind

How much did she enjoy

And force her past to leave it behind?

Silently amused about her sheer joy,

The lake that silently flowed

Beside the pot-holed and windy road

I shuddered at the broad

Excitement that once she strode

This path holding my hands,

Albeit she never understands

How much delight I bear in my heart,

For this, this answer she gives

When she’s asked about me,

Not a dicky bird,

That says she. 

Reviews

[ErinLovesYou<3]

This is really cute in a odd way :3

[Tate Morgan]

One of the mos endearing and professionally done works well done You sir give me hope that others will accept the responsibility to polish works to a great shine Good Job

[msharma]

Some of the lines draw a real scene of two lovers walking on the road holding each others hands.Beautiful art of presenting.

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Well written. Art itself.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

nicely written... loved these lines:
"How much did she enjoy
And force her past to leave it behind?"

[Ripple of Aqua]

So whimsical! I really love the anticipation and admiration that seeps through the words. Great job Sujash!

[T.W. Early]

I like this one. it was different. good writing.