I need you.

Its to my bestfriend, I wrote it for her, I thought maybe it would make her stay, to see how I need her, but if leaving will make her happy, and stay there for good will... then, I'm will to let her go

 

 

 

My heart will be gone,

My smile soon will fade,

My tears will start to fall,

 

The razor will be my bestfriend again,

but only out of my own self fish game.

I'll miss you to much, to stay sane.

 

But stay there will make you happy,

then that all i ever wanted.

the hurt will get worst but only for awhile.

 

I'll learn to breathe again,

I'll learn to live,

but you will alway remind planted in my brain.

 

As you learn to do the same,

just promise not to forget about me,

I'll need you, and I hope you'll need me.

But if that what make you happy,

I'll suck it up,

 

Because I love you,

I really do.

But you will alway remain,

My heart, my smile, my soul.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sapphire.Diamond]

well it looks like its all good.
im still here? arent i?
well actually.. i am in your momma's bed
ahaahahahahahahaha :)

[Angel]

I definitely feel the emotion in this poem.
Its almost as if I can feel your hurt.
This is indeed a nice poem.
Keep it up!

[lauren emily]

I'm sorry to hear about your best friend..that really sucks.
I love this poem, though. It makes you hurt inside and think about what you have and to really appreciate it.

Well done,
Lauren

[lauren emily]

I'm sorry to hear about your best friend..that really sucks.
I love this poem, though. It makes you hurt inside and think about what you have and to really appreciate it.

Well done,
Lauren

[Kriss]

I love it, but please tell me a few of those verses won't be followed through!