But still. no one knows

But still. no one knows

A Poem by I love you; just not today.

No one knows she hides the scars,
Of the hours spent in her closet,
Listening to loud music,
And writing her story on her wrists.
No one knows why shes walking around
Headphones on,
Music blaring,
Trying to escape the hurt and feelings,
Trying to escape reality,
And trying to escape herself.
No one knows that deep inside, she's scared.
Scared of life.
Scared of what happened.
Scared of who she is.
She's always running from the cops.
But more importantly she runs from herself.
But she can't escape.
Thats why she cuts.
She doesn't hurt cause she cuts.
She cuts cause shes hurt.
She walks around with her music on
because shes hurt.
Shes running cause shes hurt.
But still. no one knows
 

© 2008 I love you; just not today.


Author's Note

I love you; just not today.
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"She cuts cause shes hurt." needs to be "she's"

Sorry, it took so long to review this. I put it in my plan to read and realized i never did so here goes my review...

This is truly a wonderful poem, I love the information in here... We all wonder why that girl in the back of the classroom stares out with the headphones on.... I know, I'm that girl minus the cutting part. I think so many people can relate to this piece. So many people need to read this to understand. This was powerful because it states things that could be obvious to others who have felt that way or ignored by the ignorant. Truly, A Great Poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


So dark, but so wonderful. I love it !

♥Kriss

Posted 15 Years Ago


take some happy pills :)
i love you :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


This formed tears in my eyes. It was sad.. Great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This hurts you silently. You did a good job with expressing the pain and hurt the girl is going through.

Good work,
Lauren

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 7, 2008
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