What are you to me?

This a poem about a teenage boy confessing his love for a girl whom he found on social media long time back and haven't meet her yet!

A thought that always made me smile
A memory which is priceless
A moment that was always made for me
A feeling which is timeless

Words? I really don't have any
to express myself

An exception which always included me
An achievement that I'm proud of
An obsession very well attempted
An urge that I'm lacking of

Phrases? They were never mine

The dream which is not that easy
The soul whom I've bothered
The meaning which is well defined
The stranger whom I love
You are the stranger whom I love!!

Author's Note

Ignore the punctuation please

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Most of the time I use very little punctuation in my poetry becuz I want the reader to decide where to pause & how to read. So I suggest you not worry about excusing lack of punctuation or having a few bumps in your use of English. Here you've laid out a bunch of assorted phrases (all interesting & well crafted) that give the reader an outline of how this experience may have felt for you. It's a relatable online experience for many & your observations are original. The only thing that could pump up your future writings would be to try to use more specific details. The more details you paint using all the senses (how does it feel? how does it look? how does it sound? how does it smell? Show me some colors, let me hear some sounds) -- the more unique your message will be. For example, what is that achievement you're proud of? You don't have to spell it out in an extended way, but just a word or two to help us imagine what exactly you are referring to with this line. Like, maybe: making the other person laugh could be that achievement, or finding the right words when you feel tongue-tied. These details help us visualize this experience even more. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sumit singh]

Wow. Thank you for the your buddy. I will make sure implement all this from onwards and since I've just started writing I'm not that good I guess.

[barleygirl]

You are very good as a raw beginner! Please do not take that from my review! Starting with what you already have right now (which is perfectly good writing naturally, I'm only giving ideas for future development!

[Sumit singh]

Yeah. I totally appreciate that efforts of your buddy. And I wish I'll definitely be able to impress you 😂 with my poems one day.