Open My Mind
A Poem by
Summer Nazarian
Do not be afraid of letting go and trying something new.
Open my mind
Open my soul
Open the doors
I have closed
Open my dreams
Close my memories
Open my heart
Set me free
Open the last
Close my past
Open my heart
It beats real fast
Open my mind
Open my soul
Open the doors
I have closed
© 2017 Summer Nazarian
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This is the best kind of prayer - simple, yet complete. "Open the doors I have closed". This speaks volumes in few words. Well done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Thank you fellow writers. I appreciate the feedback. Blessings to all!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Thank you fellow writers. I appreciate the feedback. Blessings to all!
A simplistic rhythmic mantra one could repeat. Thanks.
The only thing that threw me off was "open the last"
Posted 7 Years Ago
A simplistic rhythmic mantra one could repeat. Thanks.
The only thing that threw me off was "open the last"
Lifting our confessions and asking forgiveness through prayer: this is how I found myself thinking after I read your wonderfully penned piece ... :-)
Posted 7 Years Ago
Lifting our confessions and asking forgiveness through prayer: this is how I found myself thinking after I read your wonderfully penned piece ... :-)
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Added on August 9, 2017
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Summer Nazarian Novato, CA
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I am a mother of 3 and a grandmother. Just turned 40 this year. I am a spiritual woman that is always looking for ways to improve myself, naturally. I am creative, honest, and fun-loving. I love writ..
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