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Why do these souls fade away?
Dissipating like vapor in to a ghostly wind.
Rising up to places we can not reach,
Their view from the stars must be a beautiful one. 

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

it takes a moment for the soul to fade away... soon our trace is erased....no one actually knows where does this soul go..... good one

[Audrey Wynters]

Thank you, you captured the essence of the poem beautifully.

[Lizardo]

Another great poem. I do love the last line.
Wonderful poem.

[Audrey Wynters]

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback very much.