What Happened?

What Happened?

A Poem by Susie
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Written at 1.30am with a racing mind.

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What happened?
Why is it that I can barely think straight during the day,
and I can't STOP thinking during the night?
Is this how you know you've reached adulthood?
Does independence and responsibility simply equal sleepless nights?...
I have a bone to pick with whoever drives the wheel of time.
Chuck it in reverse. For eight hours. Three hours ago.
Let me catch up.

© 2014 Susie


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Time for a little chill out time, me thinks ?

Interesting poetic thoughts on a transient state go mind!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Susie

9 Years Ago

Good call!
And thank you! :D
I have a friend who has insomnia! He's on this website...
Enough about him and on you! This is a definitely a relatable read for me. 8/10

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Insomnia fro different reasons and effects. So many things bother us or keep us up to enjoy and cherish the nights. A wonderful write...:)..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Susie

10 Years Ago

Very true. Thank you for reading, Sami : )
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................

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Added on February 5, 2014
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Tags: life, reality

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Susie
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Adelaide, Australia



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