My Broken Love

To simplify the graphic design, of the single design

That's implanted deep within in my mind

The genetics that redefine

The striking soul resting deep inside

Only penetrating to find

That abandoned truthful sign

Resting in the hearts of yours and mine

You have those eyes, the darkest eyes

Capturing my soul deep inside

Praying to try to release and rewind

It's the worst kind of pain

Letting faith follow in the trail of love

Reviews

[D Poet K]

in my contest, this poem had the best flow and rhymed the best...it was short, yet it was good

[Lydia]

I love how well this flows and you evoke some very deep feelings with your words.

Great Job.

[Joseph - Michael]

I really like how you've used "graphic design" as a metaphor like that. I'm a graphic designer myself (in some ways) and I really enjoyed it. It may be short, yet it sure is very nicely done...

So, it's all good tho...

[kurrupted]

short and deep, well written and thought provoking.i like the flow and believe me the rhyming is very good.
each line stands out in its own style thus giving the poem a highly connective format.
indeed where love is not at its best form "Letting faith follow in the trail of love" is the best possible option to take. nice write

[The Mad Prophet]

This was touching. I like self exploration with colorful words.

[James Takeo Panton]

Short and sweet, warm and honest....works well!!