A Jasmine Moon

Surrendering to love beneath the spell of a jasmine moon.

 

I felt the undeniable touch

of your eyes for the first time...

 and the endearment of your arms,

but it was the sweet taste of your lips 

that overpowered me

an intoxicating scent of desire...

A whisper of a jasmine moon

shining upon the window of my soul,

as I surrendered 

upon sheets of moonlight...

A rosette of stars

spiraling out of control

shining upon mountains,

luscious peaks and valleys,

beneath the spell of a jasmine moon.

 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading...Warmly, SyberRose

Reviews

[anant mody]

wwwooooww reallyy cool onee

keep up good work:-):-)

[Sami Khalil]

"A whisper of a jasmine moon

shining upon the window of my soul,

as I surrendered

upon sheets of moonlight..."

I feel sometimes we are helpless but to surrender to love and nature's beauty especially a jasmine moon...A beautiful surrender though and poem...:).......................

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and glad you enjoyed this piece...thanks you for peeking in my window...:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................

[Aethereal]

There's beautiful imagery here. A first embrace beneath the Moon surrendering to jasmine sheets of lunar bliss... There’s another song in this. The last two lines of your first verse should read:

that overpowered me,
an intoxicating scent of desire…

[SyberRose]

Thank you again and appreciate those comments...so glad you enjoyed this one...:)

[Aethereal]

You seem to have a whole book of poems on here. I'll be back time and time again. Don't go anywhere!

[SyberRose]

I won't ha

[s y e]

Omg. This is amazing, SR, I loved it.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sye...glad you enjoyed...I was just reading your profile a few minutes ago...you have had an interesting life...Hugss...Rose

[s y e]

I loved it. :) Aha, I have, very different huh? Hugs xox

[jerrypat]

Ah yes, those . . . "luscious peaks and valleys" . . . are a wonderment and delight to those involved in the time-honored dance of desire.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for that creative response...you always paint such a desirable image with your responses Jerry...thank you again.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Eileen for reading and commenting...appreciate it very much.
~SyberRose

[EileenMarie]

Oh so beautiful...... I could feel it! Great job