Destiny

A Rendezvous Poem

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  Will we meet in the sunshine?

   under the mulberry tree

  Or meet in the seclusion of night~

  All this time I have wondered

  What will it be like?

                                 

  Will my heart still wonder?

   Alone in our rendezvous…

  Our secret garden of romance,

  At last I will be alone with you~

                                 

  Our silhouettes will embrace,

  On satin sheets of blue;

  Upon the wall of discreet

  In the mirror of breathless hue~

                                 

  I will count each second and minute,

  Until the final hour arrives…

  Wrapped in your arms my love;

  Will the passion in the night survive?

                                 

  Together we will surrender;

  To the orgasm of once fantasy~

  You and I my belove~

  Call me by my name...Destiny.

   

  ©SyberRose

Reviews

[SteveB]

An interesting write which is open to many interpretations which is always a good thing. IS it an illicit affair, is it true love, or is it indeed awaiting destiny whatever that may be? Well done.

[SyberRose]

How about all three haa...all wrapped up into one...thanks Steve..Rose:)

[Leandro Mendez]

this is just such a beautifully written piece :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Leandro...I'm happy you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Rose, simply beautiful. Your poem painted a wonderfully sensual and romantic scene in my mind this day. My hearts beats in a more melodic rhythm after reading your perfect piece. Very nice.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and thanks for taking time to read today...:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Another lovely piece, well done.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Poetic...thank you visiting as always...Rose

[Soma-ko]

Destiny, what an interesting concept, where one believes not in chance but in fate. A lovely poem that has a nice ring to it. Great job, and much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

thank you dear Soma...nice to hear from you as always and hope you are enjoying your summer:)

[Soma-ko]

So far so good I must say. I hope you too are enjoying your summer.

[SyberRose]

Its been raining alot so far and more rain today.

[Soma-ko]

Here is quite hot, but the forecast says that there will be rain soon. Hope not, and hope the rain dies down where you are as well (unless you enjoy the rain). :)

[SyberRose]

I don't mind it...

[Soma-ko]

It's very peaceful, and I myself don't mind getting a little wet.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you just think in sensual terms and that translates onto the page in beautiful poetry...poetry that combines nature, eternity and the here and now of relationships...what they could be and what they are...

and there is so much intensity in all phases..

jacob

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jacob...I'm happy you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Lovely Stable and better work :) Loved it ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[SyberRose]

Cheers to you too Singh...thanks for peeking in today:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Its my pleasure :)

[Frieda P]

God I love this one Rose, lovely painting, creative fantasy of a sensual poem here. Enchanting read....

[SyberRose]

Thank you Frieda...I couldnt get on there today except this morning for a short time...they must have been doing maintenance again.:)

[NA]

Oh so very beautiful .....enjoyed:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Raven...I always appreciate your visits.:)